Oh wow, I loved this!! So unique! James shows up three days later. Oh my God, you had me right there! What a great set up, and you have wonderful lines all throughout. I love the vignette structure, with every line meaning so much more for its sparseness. I love the reasons Sirius and Lily don't show. I love anything that looks at the friendship between James and Remus without Sirius as intermediary, and this did that so well. And he doesn't know Tonks is dead, oh, ouch. So original and well told. :)
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Date: 2010-07-31 03:46 pm (UTC)